📌 这节课讲了什么
这节课的板书上有四大块内容,全部围绕「把话说具体」这一个动作:
- P2 事件题 Describe a time when you had a problem with an electronic device —— 用 Nancy 请「我」帮她剪视频这件事当素材,按「人时地事」四要素铺开,一路讲到 calm 和 comedian 两个收尾词。
- P2 广告题 Describe an advertisement with a famous person in it —— 麦当劳的 McFlurry 广告,重点是把一句描述堆成「时间状语 + 主句 + 伴随状语(独立主格)+ 结果状语」的长句。
- 阅读「7字诀」 —— 选项错在哪几类,以及一句话:选择题就是一个题量多的判断题。
- 写作 Clarity —— 环境类大作文,先把 because 后面的 driving factors 说清楚,再举例、再转折。
🧱 框架:P2 事件题 = person + X
板书上把这题的骨架写得很干脆:
PERSON + X（电脑有问题的经历）
- person —— 人怎么写(Nancy 这条线,见下节;板上标了 smart cookie she is)
- X —— 话题本身,也就是「电脑有问题的经历」
写完之后要 Print / correct(打出来、改一遍),再回到两条时间线:
| 板上的问句 | 板上给的答案 |
|---|---|
| when was it? | sometime between 7 and 8 when i got her call. |
| 板上的另一条 | last summer. |
it was, it was —— 板上连着写了两个 it was,就是提醒:讲故事先落时间,用 It was ... 起头最省事。
💬 这道题怎么讲:Nancy 帮我剪视频
1. 人时地事(左栏竖着写的四个字)
| 要素 | 板书内容 |
|---|---|
| 人 | NANCY —— helping out nancy with her video. / edit her clips 短片 |
| 事 | 她给你 / 你剪视频(忘充电) |
| 起因 | plug in the power cord for the laptop |
2. 出问题的经过
板书上圈了一个大圈,里面是故障的现场:
my plug in my computer was hacked dust covered on the stud between motherboard and the graphic card.
然后情绪和动作:
I was in panic, took the laptop to a repair shop
再一个圈,是反转的结论:
turned out that / the laptop was out of battery. / outta battery. / ouda battery.
out of battery 在口语里会被吞成 outta battery、甚至 ouda battery —— 板书上三种写法并列,就是要记住「听起来是什么样」。
3. 三个评价词
fancy interesting 令人感兴趣的 roller coaster. 过山车
一件事讲完,用 roller coaster(像坐过山车一样)收,比说 very surprising 有画面得多。
4. 右栏的词库(备用,想不起来时挑一个)
crash vanish into air. was hacked beeping 报警声 dust covered on the stud between motherboard and the graphic card. nothing serious auto backup 备份 out of battery. terrifying
旁边还有两个中文提示:不能保存、数据恢复。
🧱 框架:把「人」写出来 —— smart cookie she is
板上单独圈了一团,起头是 起因:
nancy-english blogger she is a smart cookie. she is a jack of all trade. 万事通
接着是「她为什么需要我」:
她基本上不会让别人帮她剪视频. she doesn't need any help with her videos. 工作很忙 = caught up in her job hit me up 联系我 to help her out / with her video's editing.
hit me up 是「找我、联系我」的口语说法,放在 to help her out 前面,一句就把「她来找我帮忙」说完了。
🧱 收尾:calm 和 comedian
calm = 冷静
keep calm + no matter what happened
板书给了三个同义的说法,可以轮着用:
stay calm all the times always remain calm keep cool
thanks to this experience.
thanks to this experience 是标准的收尾句:不管这件事当时多糟,一句 thanks to 就把它变成了收获。
comedian 喜剧人
if i were to share
if i were to share 是「如果我要讲出来」——用虚拟语气起头,后面接一个自嘲的句子:
nobody would believe that you would mistake the computer running out of battery for it being broken.
mistake A for B = 把 A 当成 B。同一个意思板上还给了另外两种说法:
think of the computer running out of battery as it being broken. I think that the computer is out of battery when it's just out of battery
以及三个可以互换的搭配槽:
think of ____ as mistake _ for _ take ____ as
it makes me look like a comedian.
最后补一句澄清的话:
what i really meant was that ...
🔊 发音:share / shell
板书右下角圈了两个词,都打了勾:
share ／ shell shell 贝壳
- L —— 上翘的舌尖,对应 shell
- R —— 弯曲的舌身,对应 share
旁边还写了元音组合的对应关系:
a / e + r → ar / er e + L → sheR
同样是「e + 舌侧音」,舌尖翘起来是 shell,舌身卷起来就是 share —— 这一组要连起来念。
🧱 广告题:Describe an advertisement with a famous person in it.
板书上把题目的后半截单独圈了出来:with a famous person in it.
主体是 mcdonald 麦当劳,板上一层层往下拆:
| 板上写的 | 说明 |
|---|---|
| theme color - yellow | 主题色黄色 |
| represent | 代表 |
| 生命力 = vitality | 黄色代表的生命力 |
| combines chocolate and vanilla | 巧克力 + 香草 |
| Mcfurry is a mix of chocolate and vanilla 香草味 | McFlurry 就是这两样的混合 |
| glow / flow | 配的两个词 |
开头两句
I would like to talk about mcdonald advertisement
这句是草稿。板上在下面又写了一遍更完整的版本:
I would like to talk about an advertisement that impressed me, which is a mcdonald commercial
用 that impressed me 把广告接住,再用 which 补一个同位说明 —— 一句话就把题目抄了进去。
声音的三层
标语 slogan - goes like i'm lovin it. 我就喜欢 音乐 - catchy / upbeat music ringback tone is the theme song of mcdonald. I set a mcdonald theme song as my ringback tone. ) set the tone - 做榜样
ringback tone 是彩铃。把麦当劳的主题曲设成自己的彩铃,是「这个广告对我有影响」最具体的证据。板上在旁边补了 set the tone 的意思是「做榜样」。
画面的一句
meticulously 精心地 + designed ／ commercial you know, there are many versions. what I like the most is the one that features Mcflurry.
what I like the most is the one that ... —— 万能的「我最喜欢的是那一版」。
💬 描述广告的那个长句(状语分层)
板上把这句拆成了四层,这是这节课最值钱的一页:
| 层 | 板书 |
|---|---|
| 时间状语 | when music plays |
| 主句 | 我能看到这个广告 |
| 伴随状语(独立主格) | mouth watering |
| 就像(as if) | as if the mcflurry was in front of me |
| 再往下挂 | with its clear composition |
| 继续挂 | with its velvet surface mixed with oreo fragments, each slide creating a unique |
| 结果状语 | making my taste bud 味蕾 excited |
也就是说:时间状语 → 主句 → as if 比喻 → 两个 with 叠加 → 结果状语。一层一层往下挂,句子就长了,但每层都在加画面。
同一块板上还有另一句风景描写,结构一模一样:
when the sun / i can see / its waves lapping / as if a giant was breathing / leaving silver fringes on the beach.
最后只留一个反问:
Do you like it?
📝 7字诀(阅读:选择题就是题量多的判断题)
板上画了一张答题卡(A / B / C / D 四个选项),旁边标着 full attention,右侧刷出一串判断选项正误的条目:
- 原词. 但是含义错误. 逻辑错误
- 无中生有.
- 错配. 信息错位
- 相反.
第 2 条旁边专门牵了一条线出来,写着 比较 / 绝对化 / 概念 —— 也就是说,「无中生有」这一大类里,最常见的就是比较级、绝对化说法和偷换概念。
板下方框里是三句总结:
错误 不代表 常理来说不对 错误 只代表 原文没提 选择题就是一个 题量多的判断题.
这三句是这节课最容易丢分的地方:判断一个选项错,唯一的依据是「原文没提」,而不是「常理上不对」。不要用自己的常识去补原文的空。
🧱 写作 Clarity:环境问题怎么答
题目:
What is the biggest environmental problem facing your country?
第一步:问题读一遍 + 直接回答
板书先把答案的方向定了:水 / 空气污染,然后给出句子的骨架:
in my opinion ↑ ... the biggest ... is air pollution 空气污染 = environmental issue
the biggest / pressing / urgent
也就是说,回答要一路顶着 the biggest 和 pressing / urgent 走,不能平平地说一个意见。
第二步:because 后面才是重点
板书把 because 单独拎了出来,框住两个词:
because ) environmental issue - industrialization and urbanization. 旁边标注:main - ei - ǝn factors
解释句:
The driving factors for environmental issue are industrialization and urbanization. of course.
下面是答题的动作要求:字一个断句 —— 一句一句断开来写,不要一口气套长句。
第三步:举例
人口和工业化的推论链:
population ／ industrialization —— urbanization. the population grows / as the population grows ... 导致 / have led to ... ? / a surge in exhaust and emissions
落到具体句子上:
have led to a surge in vehicles' emissions and factory exhaust
板上在 exhaust 旁边特意标了读音:ekzost。
第四步:For example
examples: For example ↑ Beijing grey haze 霾 AQI ／ Air quality index reach / critical 生死攸关的 levels 水平 humidity - 80%. humid - mountain / sluggish.
整段的连接词串起来是这样:
when you take a look at ... (板上把这个短语圈了起来) which means unhealthy notice that AQI really stands out it reaches critical levels frequently / which means unhealthy and that is because
第五步:转折
转折:but transiting to cleaner energy, although we are still in the process of innovating different new energy like nuclear, thermal, hydroelectric and renewables power. nuclear. 核能.
一个 but 把前面所有的问题都翻过去:问题很大,但我们正在过渡到清洁能源 —— 尽管还在创新的过程中。
📖 词汇与表达
| 英文 | 中文 | 搭配 / 用法 |
|---|---|---|
| crash | 崩溃、死机 | 电脑出问题的第一反应词 |
| vanish into air | 化为乌有 | 数据没了 |
| be hacked | 被黑了 | was hacked |
| beeping | 报警声 | 机器滴滴叫 |
| motherboard | 主板 | dust covered on the ... |
| graphic card | 显卡 | between motherboard and the graphic card |
| nothing serious | 没什么大问题 | 反转过后的安抚 |
| auto backup | 自动备份 | 备份 |
| out of battery | 没电 | 吞音读作 outta / ouda battery |
| terrifying | 吓人的 | 形容当时的感受 |
| plug in | 插上 | plug in the power cord for the laptop |
| power cord | 电源线 | |
| clip | 短片 | edit her clips |
| content | 内容 | filmed a video / content |
| in panic | 慌了 | I was in panic |
| repair shop | 修理店 | took the laptop to a repair shop |
| turned out that | 结果是 | 反转句的开头 |
| fancy | 花哨的、不一般的 | |
| roller coaster | 过山车 | 形容一波三折 |
| smart cookie | 聪明人 | she is a smart cookie |
| jack of all trade | 万事通 | she is a jack of all trade |
| caught up in her job | 工作很忙 | |
| hit me up | 联系我 | 口语 |
| help sb out | 帮某人一把 | to help her out |
| keep cool | 保持冷静 | 同 stay calm / remain calm |
| thanks to this experience | 多亏了这次经历 | 收尾句 |
| comedian | 喜剧人 | it makes me look like a comedian |
| mistake A for B | 把 A 当成 B | mistake the computer running out of battery for it being broken |
| think of A as B | 把 A 当作 B | 与 mistake / take 互换 |
| slogan | 标语 | goes like i'm lovin it. |
| catchy / upbeat music | 抓耳的、欢快的音乐 | 形容广告歌 |
| ringback tone | 彩铃 | set a mcdonald theme song as my ringback tone |
| set the tone | 定调子、做榜样 | |
| meticulously | 精心地 | meticulously designed |
| commercial | 广告 | 比 advertisement 更口语 |
| vitality | 生命力 | 黄色代表的生命力 |
| vanilla | 香草味 | combines chocolate and vanilla |
| oreo fragments | 奥利奥碎 | mixed with oreo fragments |
| velvet surface | 丝绒般的表面 | its velvet surface |
| taste bud | 味蕾 | making my taste bud excited |
| wave lap | 海浪拍打 | its waves lapping |
| silver fringe | 银色的边 | leaving silver fringes on the beach |
| haze | 霾 | grey haze |
| AQI | 空气质量指数 | Air quality index |
| critical | 生死攸关的 | reaches critical levels frequently |
| humidity | 湿度 | humidity - 80% |
| humid | 潮湿的 | |
| sluggish | 凝滞的、惰性的 | 形容空气不流动 |
| surge | 激增 | a surge in vehicles' emissions |
| exhaust | 尾气 | 读作 ekzost |
| emission | 排放 | exhaust and emissions |
| industrialization | 工业化 | driving factors 之一 |
| urbanization | 城市化 | driving factors 之一 |
| population | 人口 | as the population grows |
| pressing / urgent | 紧迫的 | 修饰 the biggest problem |
| driving factors | 驱动因素 | The driving factors for ... are ... |
| nuclear | 核能 | |
| thermal | 火电、热力 | |
| hydroelectric | 水电 | |
| renewables | 可再生能源 | renewables power |
| transition to | 转向 | transiting to cleaner energy |
⚠️ 提醒 / 易错
1. 事件题不要只讲故障,要讲「人」。 板上的结构是 PERSON + X,person 那一半(Nancy 是谁、为什么找我)不能省,X 那一半(电脑怎么了)才有落点。
2. 同一个意思给足三种说法。 板上一再并列写:
- 冷静:stay calm all the times / always remain calm / keep cool
- 把 A 当 B:think of ... as / mistake ... for / take ... as
考场上一时想不起其中一个,直接换下一个。
3. 长句靠「挂」不靠「堆」。 描述广告那句的顺序是固定的:when ...(时间)→ 主句 → as if ...(比喻)→ with ... with ...(细节)→ making ...(结果)。少一层句子就短,多一层就多一个画面。
4. 阅读里判断选项错,标准只有一个 —— 原文没提。 板上原话:错误 不代表 常理来说不对,错误 只代表 原文没提。「比较 / 绝对化 / 概念」这三类陷阱,统统归到「无中生有」里。
5. 大作文答环境题,because 后面必须落到 driving factors。 不要停在「空气污染很严重」,要接着说 industrialization and urbanization,再 For example, Beijing,再 AQI reaches critical levels frequently,最后用 but 转到清洁能源。整段用 字一个断句 的方式写,一句一个信息点。
