📌 这节课讲了什么
这节课从一张 workstation(工作台)的照片出发,把同一个素材往三道题上套:先答 Can you describe your room?,再答音乐题 Does happy music make you feel more excited?,最后落到一张 P2 卡片 Describe a place you would like to visit in your free time。
中间讲了两个方法:一是根据上一句话的最后一个「主题」去发散,让话自己接下去;二是用定 / 名 / 状三类从句把句子接长。板书左下角还标了一句总纲:一个素材不是 one-size-fit-all solution,同一批词要在不同题目里反复用。
🧱 素材:workstation(一张照片,一批句子)
板书对着照片先写了两句描述:
Through the floor-to-ceiling window, you can see a workstation — futuristic
where there is a monitor glowing with code, mechanical keyboard, a leather ergonomic chair, all arranged with meticulous precision, making this place look like a tech command center for a tech savvy.
后面又用第一人称重说了一遍:
simple but futuristic.
i have a great workstation where is a monitor glowing with code,
i have 4 floor-to-ceiling windows surrounding me, i like to look out of the window sitting on my leather ergonomic chair, there is a mechanical board that i just bought, it's a gaming accessory that makes a unique clinking sound of plastic. it's a creative sound, i enjoy the rhythm
they are all arranged with meticulous precision, making this place look like a room that i can live in permanently
板书还记了两个词:a game buff(游戏迷),以及 one-size-fit-all solution——提醒你别指望一个万能答案,同一个素材要拆开用。
🧱 答一:Can you describe your room?
房间题直接调用上面的词组就行,板书挑出来的是这三条:
- a leather ergonomic chair
- a monitor glowing with code
- making this place look like a tech command center for a tech savvy.
🧱 答二:Does happy music make you feel more excited?
先否定,再给真正的答案 —— 板书用的是强调句:
it is not happy music that makes me excited.
it's the rhythm(旋律本身)
personal stuff —— 从音乐转到自己的东西:
I like to sit on my leather ergonomic chair, listening to futuristic music with my earbud equipped with noise-cancellation.
share pop music that i like with my friends
songs from the weeknd, a mega star in northamerica, or internationally.
she likes the futuristic sounds.
sound effect, he even incorporates some sound effect,
he even incorporates some sound effect that manipulates my emotion.
more of an amateur
原文歌词 —— 板书上抄了两句歌词,旁边的歌名是 Snowchild (Explicit),演唱者 The Weeknd:
She like my futuristic sounds in the new spaceship
I just signed a new deal with Mercedes
板书还单独记了一个词:mansion。
🧱 答三:Describe a place you would like to visit in your free time
卡片四问板书原样抄了下来:
Where it is
What you will do there
How long you will stay there
And explain why you would like to visit it
Where it is —— 板书给的开场和定位:
I would like to talk about a place that I'd like to visit in my free time.
it's in a village
and it's one hour driving distance from urban area.
板书在 where 这一行旁边写了 click:一问一答,像点击一样,一点一个答案点出来。
What you will do there —— 板书先给一句总起,再补细节:
I can do a lot of things there.
workstation where there is a monitor glowing with code,
rolling hills, swaying in the wind
How long you will stay there:板书旁边记的是 for a week。
风景素材 —— 描述这个地方长什么样:
there is nothing but raw, untamed nature.
golden wheat swaying in the wind.
rolling hills / golden wheat swaying in the wind, / not a single person in sight
creating a sense of isolation/quietness/peacefulness
为什么不想长住(explain 那一问) —— 板书用「对比」收:
mixed bag of technology and raw scenery.
板书中文标注:「混搭」「大杂烩」。
the reason comes down to the same contrast.
板书中文标注:归结于。
why i dont wanna live there for a long time
although 的转折链条:
Although I find the idea fascinating of being completely cut off while working on my projects
Isolation becomes suffocating
I dont wanna be driving an hour for groceries or having no one nearby in an emergency.
I would always miss the convenience of a friendly neighborhood when the novelty wore off
板书在旁边标注:消耗光。
🧱 方法:句子怎么接长(定 / 名 / 状)
板书左下角画了一张分类图,三类从句各管一件事:
| 类型 | 干什么 | 板书写法 |
|---|---|---|
| 定 | 修饰名词 | 名词 + where / that |
| 名 | 把一个大名词放进句子里 | what / how / why |
| 状 | 推情绪 | 孤独感 → 矛盾 → 舒服 |
宾语补足语 —— 板书在「名」这一栏下面单列了一组:
I find it fascinating.
I find the idea fascinating
of + 名词短语 —— 「名」这一类的具体用法:
I find the idea fascinating of being completely cut off while working on my projects
再用 Though / Although 把这一句接上转折。
🧱 方法:根据上一句话的最后一个「主题」去发散
板书原话:
根据上一句话的最后一个「主题」去发散
比如说:上一句说到 mechanical keyboard,下一句就顺着这个词发散到「打游戏」。
板书自己在风景那段就是这么走的:not a single person in sight → 孤独感 → 矛盾 → 舒服 → 不想长住。一个词接着一个词往下滚,不用另起炉灶。
💬 直接可以说出口的句子
房间 / 工作台:
Through the floor-to-ceiling window, you can see a workstation — futuristic where there is a monitor glowing with code, mechanical keyboard, a leather ergonomic chair, all arranged with meticulous precision, making this place look like a tech command center for a tech savvy.
simple but futuristic.
i have 4 floor-to-ceiling windows surrounding me, i like to look out of the window sitting on my leather ergonomic chair
it's a gaming accessory that makes a unique clinking sound of plastic. it's a creative sound, i enjoy the rhythm
they are all arranged with meticulous precision, making this place look like a room that i can live in permanently
音乐:
it is not happy music that makes me excited. it's the rhythm
I like to sit on my leather ergonomic chair, listening to futuristic music with my earbud equipped with noise-cancellation.
he even incorporates some sound effect that manipulates my emotion.
She like my futuristic sounds in the new spaceship
地方:
I would like to talk about a place that I'd like to visit in my free time. it's in a village and it's one hour driving distance from urban area.
I can do a lot of things there.
there is nothing but raw, untamed nature. golden wheat swaying in the wind.
rolling hills, golden wheat swaying in the wind, not a single person in sight, creating a sense of isolation/quietness/peacefulness
the reason comes down to the same contrast.
Isolation becomes suffocating
I would always miss the convenience of a friendly neighborhood when the novelty wore off
📖 词汇与表达
| 英文 | 中文 | 搭配 / 用法 |
|---|---|---|
| floor-to-ceiling window | 落地窗 | have 4 floor-to-ceiling windows surrounding me |
| workstation | 工作台 | i have a great workstation |
| futuristic | 未来感的 | simple but futuristic |
| monitor glowing with code | 屏幕上滚着代码 | |
| mechanical keyboard | 机械键盘 | a mechanical board / mechanical keyboard |
| leather ergonomic chair | 皮质人体工学椅 | sitting on my leather ergonomic chair |
| meticulous precision | 一丝不苟的精度 | arranged with meticulous precision |
| tech savvy | 懂技术的人 | a tech command center for a tech savvy |
| tech command center | 技术指挥中心 | |
| game buff | 游戏迷 | |
| one-size-fit-all solution | 一刀切的方案 | 一个素材不能到处套 |
| clinking sound | 叮当声 | a unique clinking sound of plastic |
| gaming accessory | 游戏配件 | |
| earbud | 耳机 | earbud equipped with noise-cancellation |
| noise-cancellation | 降噪 | |
| amateur | 业余爱好者 | more of an amateur |
| mansion | 豪宅 | |
| raw, untamed nature | 原始、未驯服的自然 | nothing but raw, untamed nature |
| golden wheat swaying in the wind | 风里摇摆的金色麦浪 | |
| rolling hills | 起伏的丘陵 | |
| not a single person in sight | 一个人影都没有 | |
| isolation | 隔绝、孤独感 | a sense of isolation |
| quietness | 安静 | a sense of quietness |
| peacefulness | 安宁 | a sense of peacefulness |
| mixed bag | 混搭、大杂烩 | a mixed bag of technology and raw scenery |
| contrast | 对比 | comes down to the same contrast |
| come down to | 归结于 | the reason comes down to ... |
| suffocating | 令人窒息的 | isolation becomes suffocating |
| groceries | 生活用品、食品杂货 | driving an hour for groceries |
| in an emergency | 紧急情况下 | having no one nearby in an emergency |
| neighborhood | 社区、街区 | the convenience of a friendly neighborhood |
| novelty | 新鲜感 | when the novelty wore off |
| wear off | 消退、消耗光 | |
| sunset glow | 晚霞 | |
| cut off | 与……隔绝 | completely cut off while working on my projects |
⚠️ 提醒 / 易错
- 强调句的否定要放在 it is 后面:板书示范的是 it is not happy music that makes me excited —— 先否掉题目给的那个词,再说出真正的答案(it's the rhythm)。
- 卡片每一问都要有一句「点题句」。板书在 where 旁边写了 click:Where it is → it's in a village;How long → for a week。问什么,第一句就点什么。
- 反差是这段的骨架。technology 和 raw scenery 摆在一起叫 mixed bag,最后 comes down to the same contrast,这句就是「不想长住」的理由。
- although 抬起来,再用 suffocating 压下去。 先说这个概念很迷人,再说隔绝会让人窒息,转折才有劲。
- 发散要跟着上一句的最后一个主题走。 mechanical keyboard → 打游戏,就是板书给的示范;一个素材能走多远,看你会不会顺着最后一个词往下接。
