📌 这节课讲了什么
这节课解决 P1 的一个通病:话能说,但一直停在「平 A」—— 句子都对,就是没有层次。板书给的方案是两步:第一步,用语气词 + 简单句把话说自然;第二步,套「句型库」做深层次的逻辑递进。 句型库的核心是三个句式(两个定语从句 + 一个强调句),课上用 Shopping、Watch、Social media 三道题逐个示范,把同一个意思从「我觉得」推到「本质是什么」。开头还插了一张 Minster Park 地图,练听力地图题的方位词。
🔊 听力热身:Minster Park 地图
板书贴了一张公园平面图:Minster Park。
| 图上元素 | 位置 |
|---|---|
| River | 上方一条河,横贯全图 |
| N ↑ | 右上角指北针,箭头向上 = 北 |
| West gate | 左侧入口 |
| East gate | 右侧入口 |
| South gate | 下方入口 |
| Lily pond | 正中央的圆形水池 |
| A / B / C | 左上、中上、右上三个候选位置 |
| D / E | Lily pond 左侧(D)、正上方(E) |
| F | 右侧,靠近 East gate |
| G / H / I | 左下、中下、右下 |
地图题的全部信息都在图上:先定北,再顺着 gate 和水池找相对位置。
🧱 框架:P1 的两步说话法
板书最后用一个圈做了总结,两句话:
1 可以简单解释自己 配合 语气 + 7 字诀
- 运用句型库 前三个(定从、定从、强调从)做深层次的逻辑递进。
翻译成操作:第一层永远是「我是谁 / 我怎么想」的简单句,配上语气词(well / you know / Hey);第二层才用句型库往上搭。 板书在 Shopping 答案的每一步旁边都标了「语气词 well,简单句 = 平 A」—— 提醒这两层是交替出现的。
说话前的犹豫词(板书叫「犹豫」):
um / not sure / how should I put it(咋说呢?)
🧱 句型库:三个可以套的句子
板书方框里列了一整套句型骨架,前三个是本课重点:
| 骨架 | 名称 | 用途 |
|---|---|---|
| ___ N that ___ | 定从 | 给名词补一句说明 |
| ___ N where SVO ___ | 定从 | 给「地点类」名词补说明 |
| It is N that VO ___ | 定从-强调句 | 把想强调的部分顶到前面 |
| it is not N that ___ | 强调句否定式 | 先否定「不是什么」,再说是 |
配套的示范句:
It was last summer that I came across Nancy.
N = 名词性从句 / 动名词短语 —— 强调句里被顶到前面的那个 N,可以是一整句话,也可以是一个动名词短语。板书顺手给了例子:
It is not N that makes me wear a watch.
knowing what time it is(板书给的 N 的例子)
方框里还躺着其余句型,按功能排好:
| 骨架 | 名称 | 板书例子 |
|---|---|---|
| It's adj doing ___ | 动名 | it's so nice having you.(having you is so nice) |
| SVO, doing ___ | 分状 | |
| SVO, which ___ | 非限 | |
| How / what SV | 名从 | |
| S Was done doing | 主补 | (time is spent) |
| S V O doing | 宾补 | I have videos of me and my brother pretending to be sports reporters. |
最后一条 宾补 的示范句最实用:I have videos of me and my brother pretending to be sports reporters. —— 说童年素材时可以直接搬。
💬 示范一:Shopping(从平 A 到递进)
板书问题:Do you like SHOPPING
犹豫:I have no clues. / FC
I hardly visit any brick and mortar because you can't get any item there with a below market price. haven't find my bread and butter yet. so I prefer online shopping.
转折 —— 语气词 well,简单句 = 平 A:喜好 I am really into it.
语气词 well,简单句 = 平 A:you know
感觉:it's like owning the world without leaving my chair.
语气词 well,简单句 = 平 A:but what I think is that
online shopping is just too convenient to not to buy things I don't need.
Hey, isn't it part of the fun.
句式节奏看清楚:说一句平 A → 加一个 you know → 甩一个比喻 → 用 but what I think is that 转进观点 → 用反问句收尾(Hey, isn't it part of the fun.)。板书右侧标了 LR / GRA。
💬 示范二:Watch(手表三连问)
板书在 Watch 这张卡上列了三个可以挂的钩子:keeping up with time / design / brand awareness,并给这一节起了个标题:量子纠缠。
问题:
Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
Why do some people wear expensive watches?
第三问的递进链
第一步:先把「不知道」说出来(板书写 i don't know,)
第二步:给一个心理学视角的开头
From a psychological perspective,
第三步:套句型库的两个大骨架
what motivates ___ 人 ___ to ___ 话题内容 ___ is often a deep-seated desire for transformation and a competitive edge.
In an increasingly interconnected world, Having ___ 话题内容 ___ makes them ___ in ___ 话题内容 ___.
板书写在旁边的填空词:feel better / social circle / up networking,以及中文注解:根深蒂固的渴望、对于进步、a deep seated desire、trend that is all the rage(常见)、person who stick with social media。
第四步:用强调句否定,把结论砸下去
it's not keeping up with time that makes people wear expensive watch. it's consumerism.
and in fact, it's not only an item that shows your identity but also a financial product that gives you appreciation.
第五步:换个角度收尾(普通人 vs 上层)
in fact, you are wasting time buying expensive watch for ordinary people. For those who get paid biweekly or monthly, they are trading their time for gold.(money) but when it comes it upper class, it's another story.
板书列的立场词:consumerism(消费主义)、conformity(从众)、financial product that gives you appreciation、"decent"(体面的)、depreciation / appreciation、paycheque(工资)。
第一问:你喜欢戴表吗?
No. because I think, it's just an item that tells me what time it is, and I know it easily by glancing at my phone. basically I don't need any watch.
板书把这句话拆开做了语法标注:
it's only an item that tells me what time it is.
主谓 + 宾:I know what time it is.(宾语从句)
which I easily know from electronic devices like smartphone
glancing at my phone(瞥一眼)是这句话的画面点。
💬 示范三:Social media
板书问题:1. Have you ever posted anything on social media?
yes.
because I think … bridge that allows me to show who I am.
… us to show who we are.
I think I am one of them.(one of them / one of 'em)
post pictures of what's going on in my school, what I'm up to...
it's the "feeling of being seen" that makes me wanna keep posting stories of my life.
最后一句是整节课的示范天花板:用 It is N that VO 的强调句,把「被看见的感觉」这个抽象概念顶到句子最前面。
📐 语法点:A = B —— 怎么解释一个东西是什么
板书用一个大大的 A = B 讲「解释」这个动作,并把要解释的名词分成两类:
| 要解释的东西 | 板书写法 |
|---|---|
| 有形物体(博物馆 / 艺术馆 / 公园 / 图书馆) | 是地点 place / 建筑 building / 桥梁 bridge / 抽象含义 |
| 无形物体 | 桥梁 bridge / 地点 place / 平台 platform |
所以解释 social media 时,板上写到一半:social media is a ___ —— 可填的就是上面那份清单(bridge / place / platform)。
板书还留了一组对照:
what is how —— what 指「事情」,how 指「方式」
is really important is you speak english
style
以及 How / what SV 名从 这条骨架,和一句最朴素的示范:
我的名字是:my name is flora.
旁边还标了一组中国学生的经典错误对照:
I want go(我想回家,✗)
I want to go(✓ 不定式)
📖 词汇与表达
| 英文 | 中文 | 搭配 / 用法 |
|---|---|---|
| brick and mortar | 实体店 | hardly visit any brick and mortar |
| below market price | 低于市场价 | any item there with a below market price |
| bread and butter | 饭碗、生计 | haven't find my bread and butter yet |
| I have no clues | 我完全没头绪 | 犹豫时的开场 |
| how should I put it | 咋说呢 | 犹豫词 |
| own the world | 拥有全世界 | it's like owning the world without leaving my chair |
| part of the fun | 乐趣所在 | Hey, isn't it part of the fun. |
| brand awareness | 品牌认知 | watch 的三个钩子之一 |
| keeping up with time | 跟上时代 | |
| psychological perspective | 心理学视角 | From a psychological perspective |
| motivate | 驱动 | what motivates people to ... |
| deep-seated desire | 根深蒂固的渴望 | a deep-seated desire for transformation |
| competitive edge | 竞争优势 | a deep-seated desire for ... a competitive edge |
| interconnected | 互相连接的 | In an increasingly interconnected world |
| social circle | 社交圈 | makes them feel better in their social circle |
| networking | 社交、拓展人脉 | up networking |
| all the rage | 风靡一时 | trend that is all the rage |
| consumerism | 消费主义 | it's consumerism |
| conformity | 从众 | |
| financial product | 金融产品 | a financial product that gives you appreciation |
| appreciation | 升值 | depreciation / appreciation |
| decent | 体面的 | "decent" 体面的 |
| paycheque | 工资 | |
| biweekly | 每两周一次 | get paid biweekly or monthly |
| trading time for gold | 用时间换钱 | they are trading their time for gold.(money) |
| item | 物件 | it's only an item that tells me what time it is |
| glance at | 瞥一眼 | I know it easily by glancing at my phone |
| feeling of being seen | 被看见的感觉 | it's the "feeling of being seen" that ... |
| what I'm up to | 最近在忙什么 | post pictures of what I'm up to |
| one of 'em | 他们中的一个 | one of them 的口语缩略 |
⚠️ 提醒 / 易错
- 平 A 不能省:每一层观点前面都要有一个「语气词 + 简单句」做台阶(I am really into it. / you know),不然句型再漂亮也像背课文。
- 强调句的否定式是得分点:it's not N that makes people wear expensive watch. it's consumerism. —— 先破后立,逻辑立刻有层次。
- N 可以是动名词短语:knowing what time it is 这种短语也能放进 It is N that VO 的骨架里。
- 解释类问题先分类:有形物体按 place / building / bridge 解释,无形物体按 bridge / place / platform 解释,照单挑一个填。
- 不定式别丢 to:I want to go,不是 I want go。
