📌 这节课讲了什么
这节课是 Part 1 的 walk-through(逐个话题走一遍),把 Part 1 常考的六个话题一次过完:music、theme parks、art、watch、shopping、comedies。
每一题都用同一套框架搭:先给主干(直接回答),再一层层往上挂 —— 为啥 → 如何(方式)→ 伴随 → 转折,最后收一句个人化的感悟。板书的左侧从第一题到最后一题都排着同一列检查项:框架(主干 / 为啥 / 方式 / 伴随)、语法 · 发音 · 词汇 · 流利、基本情感 / 转折 but / 感悟(个人化)。
开课前,先用一句长句做了「只留第 1 层」的示范。
🔍 先做示范:句子只留第 1 层
The United States undertakes, together with its regional partners, to create a comprehensive plan agreed upon by both parties for the rehabilitation and economic development of the Islamic Republic of Iran, while ensuring financing of at least $300 billion.
板书把这句话拆成四层:
| 层 | 板书内容 | 板书批注 |
|---|---|---|
| 主干 | The United States undertakes to create a plan | 第 1 层 |
| 为了啥 | for the rehabilitation | 为了啥 |
| 如何 / 方式 | with its regional partners, | 如何 / 方式 |
| 伴随 | while ensuring financing of at least $300 billion | 伴随 |
先有主干,再挂配件 —— 这就是这节课每一题都在做的事。
同一句的第二半,板书也是同样的处理:
The implementation mechanism of this plan, as part of the final agreement, will be formulated within 60 days.
主干是 The implementation mechanism ... will be formulated,中间的 of this plan、as part of the final agreement 都是配件。
🧱 框架:一个 Part 1 回答的六层
| 层 | 板书上的提示 | 作用 |
|---|---|---|
| 主干 | 直接回答(Yes, I ...) | 先把答案给出去 |
| 为啥 | to / for / because | 给理由 |
| 如何 | by / with | 给方式 |
| 伴随 | while feeling like ... / 非限制性定语从句, which makes me ... | 加画面、加感受 |
| 转折 | although ... / but ... | 先让一步,再说回来 |
| 感悟(个人化) | 一句只有你会说的话 | 把答案变成「你的」 |
板书左侧那一列标签,其实就是自查清单。每答完一题,依次问自己:
| 板书原文 | 自查什么 |
|---|---|
| 框架:主干 → 为啥 → 方式 → 伴随... | 六层有没有缺 |
| 基本情感 | 态度有没有摆出来(depends on my mood / hard to say) |
| 转折 but | 有没有 although / but 让一步 |
| 口语 | 是不是人话(you know / Let's say / well) |
| 语法 发音 词汇 流利 | 四项基本功 |
| 感悟(个人化) | 收尾那句是不是「我」的 |
| 语气 pronunciation. | 语气对不对 |
💬 Do you usually listen to music?
板书的四步答案:
1: Yes, I listen to music almost every day? 2. 为啥: to enjoy rhythm, genres like pop songs / RnB and sometimes country for my inner peace, because I am a music buff. 3. how? by using my earbuds 4. while feeling immersive in a different world.
收尾的两句挂件:
... that makes me energetic.
... meaning that I only feel alive with music / pitch / music note
板书在这一题下面写了一个词,算是整题的总结:
essence 本质. capturing the essence of music.
可以直接搬走的形容词(板书右栏):
- upbeat.
- catchy(抓耳的)
- soft
- ethereal
💬 Do you like visiting theme parks?
板书的开头铺垫:
visit any theme park on a whim with my Canon camera that I bought last summer.
主体:
I love visiting theme parks. 为啥? to experience magical escape from daily routine. 如何? by taking part in some attractions(项目)like roller coaster(过山车). 转折 although it's scary ... feeling like your heart is pounding out of your chest when it descends
💬 Do you like art?
板书把框架又默写了一遍,说明这是标准动作:
主干:直接回答. 为啥 to / for / because 如何 by. with 伴随 while feeling like ... / 非限制性定语从句, which makes me ... 语气 pronunciation.
完整答案:
yes, I really enjoy appreciating graffiti, to escape from daily stress and feed my imagination, and I do this by visiting local galleries or even looking at some artwork from great artists
板书的「动感」三连(动词加翅膀):
I like to / I really enjoy / I appreciate step into graffiti, sculptures / abstract paintings dive into divert / channel my interest into ...
套出来的整段:
为啥:I appreciate diving into graffiti just to experience the local culture. Let's say, when I am in a subway station in New York, because different places have it own kind of graffiti. 方式:by visiting local galleries. which makes me calm.
💬 Do you wear a watch?
well took it off for the test. I wear a smartwatch(智能手表). but I think it's no more than a beauty crap. I didn't find it useful.
功能句(板书列了一串 to do):
wear it as a fashionable accessory to track my blood pressure / heart rate to have my blood pressure monitored
最后板书留了一个词的游戏:
tiring - tiring. TIRE.
💬 Do you like shopping?
板书的答法很口语,先把态度摆出来:
depends on my mood. hard to say.
然后是「先让一步」的转折:
although it can be time-consuming and tiring to carry bags and everything ... (all that)(板书旁注:那些什么的) i can make my brain relax just by wandering in a brick and mortar, talking to the sales. you know
收尾的「个人化感悟」:
it's actually great to talk them into giving me a discount that does not exist i feel proud of me pulling this off
💬 Do you like watching comedies
板书的框架同样走了一遍(主干 / 为啥 / 方式 / 伴随):
主干:like watching comedies 为啥:to wind down and have a good laugh after a long study day. 方式:and i watch some short CLIPS(短片)... my besties(这一行后半被板书上的粘贴块压住,只能读到这些)
接着是效果和评价:
lighter sleep better at night ... talker has to be top-notch in a stand-up show combining witty wordplay with slapstick jokes maybe it could sound a bit quirky(怪诞)at first, but generally it's hilarious
这一题可以整包带走的词(板书左栏):
| 英文 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| witty wordplay | 诙谐的、机智的文字游戏 |
| slapstick jokes | 打闹式笑料 |
| hilarious | 滑稽的、好笑的 |
| quirky | 怪诞的 |
| rolling on the floor laughing | 笑到打滚 |
| cracks me up | 让我捧腹大笑 |
📖 词汇与表达
| 英文 | 中文 | 搭配 / 用法 |
|---|---|---|
| music buff | 音乐迷 | because I am a music buff |
| rhythm | 节奏 | to enjoy rhythm |
| RnB | 节奏布鲁斯 | genres like pop songs / RnB |
| inner peace | 内心的平静 | for my inner peace |
| earbuds | 耳机 | by using my earbuds |
| immersive | 沉浸的 | while feeling immersive in a different world |
| energetic | 有活力的 | that makes me energetic |
| upbeat | 欢快的 | 板书给出的评价词 |
| catchy | 抓耳的 | 板书中译:抓耳的 |
| soft | 柔和的 | 板书给出的评价词 |
| ethereal | 空灵的 | 板书写作 etheral |
| essence | 本质 | capturing the essence of music |
| on a whim | 一时兴起 | visit any theme park on a whim |
| magical escape | 魔法般的逃离 | to experience magical escape from daily routine |
| daily routine | 日常 | escape from daily routine |
| attractions | 游乐项目 | taking part in some attractions |
| roller coaster | 过山车 | like roller coaster |
| heart is pounding | 心怦怦跳 | feeling like your heart is pounding out of your chest |
| descend | 往下冲 | when it descends |
| graffiti | 涂鸦 | I appreciate diving into graffiti |
| sculpture | 雕塑 | graffiti, sculptures / abstract paintings |
| abstract paintings | 抽象画 | 同上一行 |
| divert / channel ... into | 把兴趣引到…… | divert / channel my interest into ... |
| local culture | 当地文化 | just to experience the local culture |
| smartwatch | 智能手表 | I wear a smartwatch |
| beauty crap | 中看不中用的东西 | no more than a beauty crap |
| fashionable accessory | 时尚配饰 | wear it as a fashionable accessory |
| blood pressure | 血压 | track my blood pressure / heart rate |
| heart rate | 心率 | 同上 |
| monitor | 监测 | to have my blood pressure monitored |
| tiring | 累人的 | tiring - tiring. TIRE. |
| time-consuming | 费时的 | although it can be time-consuming |
| brick and mortar | 实体店 | wandering in a brick and mortar |
| talk sb into | 说服某人 | talk them into giving me a discount |
| discount | 折扣 | a discount that does not exist |
| pull sth off | 做成某事 | i feel proud of me pulling this off |
| wind down | 放松下来 | to wind down and have a good laugh |
| CLIPS | 短片 | short CLIPS(短片) |
| top-notch | 顶级的 | talker has to be top-notch |
| stand-up show | 脱口秀 | in a stand-up show |
| wordplay | 文字游戏 | combining witty wordplay with slapstick jokes |
| hilarious | 滑稽的 | generally it's hilarious |
⚠️ 提醒 / 易错
- 六层不是六句话:主干、为啥、如何、伴随、转折、感悟,一层一层挂上去,一题就有一分钟。
- 伴随那层最好用:
while feeling ...或which makes me ...(板书写的是「非限制性定语从句, which makes me ...」),挂上去就有画面。 - 转折先让一步:shopping 那题用
although it can be time-consuming ...先把麻烦说了,再给自己台阶,听起来才自然。 - 发音和语气单独算一项:板书专门留了 语气 pronunciation. 一栏;末尾还提醒 —— time-consuming ↑~~~ ↑(like you mean it)、brick and mortar(pronounce it with confidence)。
- beauty crap 这类自嘲表达是「个人化感悟」,口语里出彩,但要知道自己在说什么。
- 先有第 1 层再有别的:回答再长,也要能一眼看出主干是谁 + 做了什么。
