📌 这节课讲了什么
这节课的板书标题只有三个字,但把整节课的主语点得很清楚:
我 "干"
讲的是「我 + 干 + 剩下的部分」这句话怎么搭起来。课上拿一道 Part 1 题当靶子:
3. Do you prefer online shopping or in-store shopping?
先把答案说完整,再把句子的后半段一层层挂上去:先是介词短语(in summer),再是状语从句(when / because / while)。板书把「小模块」这个词摆在了最前面——小模块连读对口语流利度非常有用:一句长话不是一口气憋出来的,是由一小块一小块拼出来的。
课的最后收了两条原则:
- 我们要把状语摆后面
- 流利要学会 小的惯用句
🧱 框架:先答,再挂状语
板书把这道题的答案写成了几行,一行就是一个小模块:
I prefer online shopping in summer, I would drink more pops when I feel thirsty.
拆开看:
| 部分 | 内容 |
|---|---|
| 主句(我 + 干) | I prefer online shopping |
| 介词短语 | in summer. |
| 主句(我 + 干) | I would drink more pops |
| 状语从句 | when I feel thirsty. |
状态 + 时间 + 原因,一层层往句子后面加。板书把这个顺序拎出来单独标了一行:
more …… drink …… pops
— 也就是「动词 + 宾语 + more」这个小块的摆法。
📐 语法点:状语从句 when / because / while
板书把状语分成了两类,分别写了例句:
状语从句(时间、原因)
when I feel thirsty after a long day of studies.
because I get thirsty much easier when it's too hot.
when it's too hot.
介词短语
in summer.
while —— 板书给了一句解释:
while = 一个动作在另一个动作里.
例句:
I listen to ……(我喜欢听歌)while I am reading.
也就是说,while 后面那个动作是「框」,前面那个动作是「框在里面的那件事」。
上一条板书还留了一个句型模板:
when it's + 天气 + 时间(to do sth)
它在例句里的两个形态是:
when it gets scorching(scorching 就是那个「天气」)
when it's too hot.
💬 用 while 描述一个「同时干好几件事」的场景
板书中间列了一串动作,像是在描写柜台后面那个人:
肩膀接电话 眼睛看屏幕 双手打字 在员工内部系统联系别人 面前还有一个人.
这一串正好是 while 的用武之地——几个动作同时进行,把它们挂在同一句话上,画面就出来了。写的时候注意:主体动作放主句,其余的动作往后挂。
📐 语法点:定语从句 —— 先把 that 用好
板书在这块画了颗星,写得很直接:
定语从句 = 是我的弱点. that 先把这个用好.
老实说,定语从句的花样很多, teacher 的建议是先只用 that ——把「名词 + that + 一句话」这个最基本的模块滚熟,再说别的。
板书上练的句子:
and I really like this album because it's blue. People say it's a "blue album" not just because of its color but because it's an iconic artwork.
not just because ... but because ... 是很好用的一个小模块:「不只是因为……,而是因为……」。
同一块板书上还散着这两句:
I don't want it to get wrapped bought X online
🔊 发音要点:小模块连读
这节课的标题就是「小模块连读对口语流利度非常有用」,板书把可以整块吞下去的小词单拎出来练:
| 小模块 | 板书 / 说明 |
|---|---|
| it's a | 连起来读成 itza |
| icon | 单独拎出来练的音块 |
| a | 读成 啊 |
| the | 读成 呃 |
| buy it / get it / have it | 三个一串练,it 不单独读 |
| from a / in a / on a | 介词 + a 连成一块 |
| in summer. | 介词短语整块读 |
| VINYL | 单独一个词块 |
板书的思路是:这些块不需要临场拼,练到能整块吐出来,句子的骨架(我 + 干)就有余力去想了。
💬 课上说的句子(可以直接搬)
I prefer online shopping in summer,
I would drink more pops when I feel thirsty.
I get thirsty realy easy when it gets scorching
because I get thirsty much easier when it's too hot.
I listen to ... while I am reading.
and i really like this album because it's blue.
people say it's a "blue album" —— not just because of it's color but because it's an iconic artwork.
I dont want it to get wrapped
bought X online
I've got an /a old friend in there.
最后这句板书把 an / a 并排写出来,是在提醒冠词要选对:an old friend。
🧱 小惯用句模块
板书列了一个 some + object 的小块:
some + object some water some coffee some books
可数不可数都能往 some 后面挂,这是最省事的一个量词模块。
📖 词汇与表达
| 英文 | 中文 | 搭配 / 用法 |
|---|---|---|
| online shopping | 网购 | prefer online shopping |
| in-store shopping | 到店购物 | online shopping or in-store shopping |
| pops | 汽水 | drink more pops |
| thirsty | 渴的 | when I feel thirsty |
| scorching | 酷热的 | when it gets scorching |
| album | 专辑 | really like this album |
| iconic | 标志性的 | an iconic artwork |
| artwork | 艺术作品 | it's an iconic artwork |
| get wrapped | 被包起来 | I don't want it to get wrapped |
| vinyl | 黑胶唱片 | VINYL |
| gas station | 加油站 | gas station |
| object | 物品 | some + object |
| old friend | 老朋友 | I've got an old friend in there |
⚠️ 提醒 / 易错
- 状语一律往后摆:中文习惯把时间、原因放前面,英文把它挂在句子后面,板书第一条原则就是这个。
- 流利不靠长句,靠小模块:it's a、buy it、from a 这种小块滚熟了,长句子自然就顺了。
- while 的前后是两个动作,后面的那个是「框」。
- 定语从句先只用 that,不要一上来就玩花样。
- 冠词别丢:an old friend。
🔁 这节课的骨架,一句话串起来
I prefer online shopping in summer, and I would drink more pops when I feel thirsty — because I get thirsty much easier when it's too hot.
